This is a wip and i would appreciate all advice
ColdMadHatter (talk) 21:54, November 18, 2014 (UTC)
Maybe use some templates, more passive voice, third person and past tense documenting. # Nero
If you'd like, I can put relevant information into a character infobox, and, not to be rude but, I could also clean up your grammar and readability. --Kastera (talk) 20:49, November 27, 2014 (UTC)
- sure im not one of the best writers out there all help is apprecieated ColdMadHatter (talk) 23:21, November 27, 2014 (UTC)
- I'll get started on that. I'll also add the inventory template so you can add his equipment and adjust his damage threshold accordingly. --Kastera (talk) 23:53, November 27, 2014 (UTC)